Comments for Kuntil-butil by: dyeppri http://dyeppri.wordpress.com Ibat-ibang hinagap na aking tanaw... Sun, 03 May 2009 00:59:39 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 Comment on Eroplanong Papel (Isang Kwento ng Pagmamahal…) by chu03 http://dyeppri.wordpress.com/2008/10/08/eroplanong-papel-isan-kwento-ng-pagmamahal/#comment-9 chu03 Sun, 03 May 2009 00:59:39 +0000 http://dyeppri.wordpress.com/?p=3#comment-9 ang cute ng kuwento, very touching...mahusay si rodrigo kasi sa pagmamahal niya kay michelle nagawa niyang magsumikap. iyan ang pag-ibig na may layunin, may commitment, responsable. sana kung ganyan ang lahat ng mga lalaki ay magiging maayos ang pagpapamilya. bago mag-isip na magpakasal o magpamilya ay nagsusumikap muna at nag-iipon. ano pala ang naging trabaho ni michelle, matanong ko lang? ang cute ng kuwento, very touching…mahusay si rodrigo kasi sa pagmamahal niya kay michelle nagawa niyang magsumikap. iyan ang pag-ibig na may layunin, may commitment, responsable. sana kung ganyan ang lahat ng mga lalaki ay magiging maayos ang pagpapamilya. bago mag-isip na magpakasal o magpamilya ay nagsusumikap muna at nag-iipon. ano pala ang naging trabaho ni michelle, matanong ko lang?

]]> Comment on Ang Ibat-ibang Emosyon sa Kasalan (maikling kwento) by chu03 http://dyeppri.wordpress.com/2009/03/15/ang-ibat-ibang-emosyon-sa-kasalan-maikling-kwento/#comment-8 chu03 Sat, 02 May 2009 14:08:20 +0000 http://dyeppri.wordpress.com/?p=109#comment-8 hindi natuloy ang kasal dahil sa hindi niya mahal ang lalaki at ung best friend mo ang mahal niya? sayang nga kasi kung ako bisita hindi ako makakain, maiinis ako sa bride...naalala ko tuloy noong ikinasal ang pinsan ko sa cavite pero bago sila ay may nauna ng ikinasal. nakita ko ung lalaki at babae pumasok na sa sasakyan kaya lang nagtaka ako at nagulat kami na naroon dahil ung groom umiiyak at ung bride tuwang-tuwa? ganoon kaya kapag ang lalaki ay napikot? hindi ko makalimutan ung emosyon niya dahil hindi kagalakan ung napansin ko kundi pait... mahusay ang ung paglalahad ng mga kaganapan at emosyon ng bawat indibiduwal. hindi natuloy ang kasal dahil sa hindi niya mahal ang lalaki at ung best friend mo ang mahal niya? sayang nga kasi kung ako bisita hindi ako makakain, maiinis ako sa bride…naalala ko tuloy noong ikinasal ang pinsan ko sa cavite pero bago sila ay may nauna ng ikinasal. nakita ko ung lalaki at babae pumasok na sa sasakyan kaya lang nagtaka ako at nagulat kami na naroon dahil ung groom umiiyak at ung bride tuwang-tuwa? ganoon kaya kapag ang lalaki ay napikot? hindi ko makalimutan ung emosyon niya dahil hindi kagalakan ung napansin ko kundi pait… mahusay ang ung paglalahad ng mga kaganapan at emosyon ng bawat indibiduwal.

]]> Comment on Semen’to by chu03 http://dyeppri.wordpress.com/2009/04/08/semento-2/#comment-7 chu03 Fri, 01 May 2009 10:41:56 +0000 http://dyeppri.wordpress.com/?p=88#comment-7 grabe! very artistic, dignified and self indulging... noong una hindi ko makuha but then as I read it over and over again i finally got it! very nice, job well done dyeppri. grabe! very artistic, dignified and self indulging… noong una hindi ko makuha but then as I read it over and over again i finally got it! very nice, job well done dyeppri.

]]> Comment on May Akda by dyeppri http://dyeppri.wordpress.com/may-akda/#comment-6 dyeppri Sat, 25 Apr 2009 03:35:19 +0000 http://dyeppri.wordpress.com/?page_id=26#comment-6 Salamat.. Salamat..

]]> Comment on May Akda by chu03 http://dyeppri.wordpress.com/may-akda/#comment-5 chu03 Fri, 24 Apr 2009 11:57:58 +0000 http://dyeppri.wordpress.com/?page_id=26#comment-5 ikaw na may akda: mahusay kang gumawa ng maikling kuwento bagay na hindi ko ako masyado magaling. tinitingnan ko ang karamihan sa iyong mga gawa at ang mga ito ay kawili-wiling basahin. sadyang mailkhain ka din. sana lang ay mabasa mo itong komento ko bagaman ako ay hindi gaanong mahusay sumulat ng maikling kuwento ay natututo ako sa iyong mga nilikha. nasa filipino writer din ako at may mga naipost na doon kaya lang baka maging conflict kapag doon ko isinulat tong komento ko. good success sa iyo. ikaw na may akda:
mahusay kang gumawa ng maikling kuwento bagay na hindi ko ako masyado magaling. tinitingnan ko ang karamihan sa iyong mga gawa at ang mga ito ay kawili-wiling basahin. sadyang mailkhain ka din. sana lang ay mabasa mo itong komento ko bagaman ako ay hindi gaanong mahusay sumulat ng maikling kuwento ay natututo ako sa iyong mga nilikha. nasa filipino writer din ako at may mga naipost na doon kaya lang baka maging conflict kapag doon ko isinulat tong komento ko. good success sa iyo.

]]> Comment on Mga Tula ng Lumuluwag na turnilyo #1 by chu03 http://dyeppri.wordpress.com/2009/03/10/mga-tula-ng-lumuluwag-na-turnilyo-1/#comment-4 chu03 Sat, 18 Apr 2009 16:43:06 +0000 http://dyeppri.wordpress.com/?p=103#comment-4 hi, i became curious sa website na pinost mo. so i checked it out and blog mo pala ito. i scanned some of ur works and this one got my attention. aside from being colorful (i.e. illustration ), well presented and striking, i find it very interesting so i decided to give some comments on it. it's really true that we sometimes find it hard to be with others and even to make friends with them. meron ung time na hindi mo feel ang isang tao kahit na first time mo pa lang nakita. i'm not sure kung anong tawag dun but probably most of us nararanasan un. but i learned one important lesson...that is to be always honest with yourself and to others as well and you can never go wrong. but how can you be honest and at the same time not being rude? mahirap maging modest at nice hindi ba? just like making comments or giving suggestions. whatever we say or state we sometimes let go of our thoughts and emotions kasi nga nagpapakatotoo tau but we don't realize na whatever words that comes up in our mouth or writings we can either make someone happy or sad, inspire or upset and even offend someone. writing is fun and powerful and like faith it can move mountains, influence people and even change the world but it's a big responsiblity and not everyone has that passion and gift to write. that's why you're very fortunate because you have that passion and you have that talent. i admire ur works and just continue what you had started. by the way thank you for that honest comment you've made after reading my work posted in filipinowriter.com entitled, "mabagal ang takbo ng buhay ko". honestly you made me think a lot but it did help me. again arigato gozaimasu. hi, i became curious sa website na pinost mo. so i checked it out and blog mo pala ito. i scanned some of ur works and this one got my attention. aside from being colorful (i.e. illustration ), well presented and striking, i find it very interesting so i decided to give some comments on it. it’s really true that we sometimes find it hard to be with others and even to make friends with them. meron ung time na hindi mo feel ang isang tao kahit na first time mo pa lang nakita. i’m not sure kung anong tawag dun but probably most of us nararanasan un. but i learned one important lesson…that is to be always honest with yourself and to others as well and you can never go wrong. but how can you be honest and at the same time not being rude? mahirap maging modest at nice hindi ba? just like making comments or giving suggestions. whatever we say or state we sometimes let go of our thoughts and emotions kasi nga nagpapakatotoo tau but we don’t realize na whatever words that comes up in our mouth or writings we can either make someone happy or sad, inspire or upset and even offend someone. writing is fun and powerful and like faith it can move mountains, influence people and even change the world but it’s a big responsiblity and not everyone has that passion and gift to write. that’s why you’re very fortunate because you have that passion and you have that talent. i admire ur works and just continue what you had started. by the way thank you for that honest comment you’ve made after reading my work posted in filipinowriter.com entitled, “mabagal ang takbo ng buhay ko”. honestly you made me think a lot but it did help me. again arigato gozaimasu.

]]> Comment on May Akda by dyeppri http://dyeppri.wordpress.com/may-akda/#comment-3 dyeppri Mon, 09 Feb 2009 05:12:34 +0000 http://dyeppri.wordpress.com/?page_id=26#comment-3 Hindi naman po. Busy lang. Dalawin mo kami sa http://filipinowriter.com/ ... Marami kaming nagsusulat d'yan. Hindi naman po. Busy lang. Dalawin mo kami sa http://filipinowriter.com/ …
Marami kaming nagsusulat d’yan.

]]> Comment on May Akda by John Ryan Recabar http://dyeppri.wordpress.com/may-akda/#comment-2 John Ryan Recabar Tue, 09 Dec 2008 17:37:28 +0000 http://dyeppri.wordpress.com/?page_id=26#comment-2 nais kong iparating sa iyo na kawili-wili ang iyong mga akda. subalit napansin kong tumigil ka sa pagsulat nitong mga nkaraang buwan. i'm not good in filipino, but i'm trying. i want you to know that i appreciate your attempt to write and put into words the stories created by the experiences you have been through. don't stop writing. all the nest. nais kong iparating sa iyo na kawili-wili ang iyong mga akda. subalit napansin kong tumigil ka sa pagsulat nitong mga nkaraang buwan.

i’m not good in filipino, but i’m trying. i want you to know that i appreciate your attempt to write and put into words the stories created by the experiences you have been through.

don’t stop writing. all the nest.

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